Monday, March 19, 2012

Start developing your main character

Answer the questions to get to know the main character of your short story.


·         Why, what, when, where, who and how
o   Underway from careers fair back home
o   Wants a new direction in life after difficult divorce
o   Moved over a year ago to a remote area to create headspace
o   Is getting out of the darkness and ready to move forward again

·         What motivates him
o   Direction
o   A new start
o   Nature
o   Camping
o   His cat without tail
o   Pink Floyd

·         How does this character react in difficulty
o   Usually resolute and energetically, but he got deflated by his difficult marriage and divorce. It is only now that he starts picking up the pieces and that we see glimpses of his old self again

·         How does this character appear to those who know him well
o   Solid, a bit rough, a loner
o   Trustworthy
o   A good man
o   Difficult to get to know well

·         What life complications exist for your character
o   A manipulative ex-wife
o   A mum with dementia
o   Heart problems. He has had surgery in the past and got 2 stents in an artery

·         Foibles, flaws or mannerisms
o   Withdraws when things get tough
o   Drinks one glass of whisky at night before going to bed to wind down

·         Loves and hates
o   Loves cuddling his cat
o   Loves sitting on the veranda late at night with his whisky
o   Hates visiting his mum and seeing her deteriorate
o   Hates being insecure since discovering he had a heart condition

·         When and where did/do they live
o   Lives in Denmark. Has lived there all his life

·         Who is in their family (family background)
o   He has a brother in Sweden
o   A mum in a home
o   An ex-wife
o   Friends from Uni, spread out over the country. They see each other once a year for a catch-up weekend at one of his friends’ bach in the forest

·         Formative life experiences
o   Went to Uni
o   Had a job as manager of a dairy coop. Quit his job to think about ‘what next’.
o   Collapsed after an ice skating tour. That was when his heart condition was discovered

·         Appearance
o   Weathered
o   Trim
o   Clothes are worn. Not interested in fashion 
Clean

Language based strategies


  • Create a table as below
  • Choose a colour or another trigger sensory word and write that word repeatedly in the rows of the first and third column (in this case 'white')
  • Think of words that associate with your trigger word by sound or meaning
  • Then write a paragraph using as many of the words you have listed in the sound column
  • Do the same, but now with the meaning column words.


Association
By sound
Association
By meaning
White
Wait
White
Hot
White
Maid
White
Snow
White
Whitebait
White
Clean
White
Fight
White
Pristine
White
Flight
White
Virgin
White
Marmalade
White
Blood
White
Marmite
White
Colour
White
Parachute
White
Linen
White
Hide
White
Bright

He stood on the shoreline and watched the water making circles around the whitebait net. The season hadn’t been great thus far, he thought, as he walked towards his net. He didn’t want to get into another fight with his wife today. She needed him to bring in a good catch for their guests. A shame that you can’t get away with giving them a piece of bread with Marmalade or Marmite these days, he mused with a smile. 

He looked over the pristine estuary to the snow-capped peaks in the distance. It was going to be one of the first hot days, he could feel it. Squinting into the reflections on the water he arrived at his net. He started to haul the bright green mass in. His son compared the colour of the net with alien blood. He was into aliens at the moment. Has been for the last three weeks. Who knows what would follow next. Virgins?

Thursday, March 1, 2012

About a dream

This exercise is about the last dream I had. Write anything, doesnt matter what, doesn't even have to be related to that dream. I only remember counting squares of some kind (! As you do on an ordinary day) with other people present and an agitated mood.



She was at the wharf. Large black hulls of cargo ships were looming on the other side of the jetty. People clad in black pants and jackets ran up and down the jetty with black suitcases on their shoulders. One of them lost his footing, tripped over and just managed to stay upright. His suitcase however slid from his shoulder and fell on the ground with a thud. The side that hit the ground first split open and brown squares the size of a hand spilled out and onto the jetty.

'Hey, what the hell do you think you're doing!', she yelled.

'I dunno, I just nearly fell', he shouted back.

'You idiot, you damaged my suitcase and my squares! Make sure not one is missing. Count them and tell me how many you've got. There can't be one missing, you know how dangerous that is. Get a couple of the others to help you, as you've caused a situation here. When you're done counting and made sure we've got all the squares back please jump in the water, I don't need you anymore.'

She turned around, her leather coat moving stiffly when she walked away towards the cargo ship.